four warm senses

I am not blind,
for my world dances
amongst the stars.

Your butterfly whispers of
Summer promises
soothe my soul,
for you are my priceless treasure,
a beacon of my existence.

Fragrance of Spring's blossom
blends with your touch,
a balm,
where I sashsay into the light
of a sky for two.

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Prompt: Unseen
Requirements: No more than 50 words please

A contest entry

Word Prompt IV - by Manda Kathryn. 400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 10 entries
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Manda Kathryn
November 17, 2008

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I like the first line, it is the opposite of the prompt and begins the strong poem!

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