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Black Widow & Web

Don't gaze on me I am the Black Widow…
Keep this widow rose this is tender most…
The rain did make this sphere and arouse…
The drops on this rose and my kiss charm…

Look at the beauty of mine making adore…
The night falling dark and am shining most…
Come and love me, make union with a soul…
The venom inside me makes mad and arose…

Slumber I love you with charm, take my all…
Venom penetrates to ecstasy making mine…
The dawn thy beautiful most in night mine…
Why you are tied to my web, set you free…

Come again tonight don't keep waiting long…
You own my charm then and I will feed on...

This poem is out come from the insist of my darkside friend Majestic Lady BlackWidow on Vampire Site.

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