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Willow In Rain

Why Willow Weeps?


A Knight wandering through the jungles,
Found a beautiful girl and the love mingles.
First he was unable and very thin in approach,
Didn't say anything, eyes was making vast prose.

He started finding thesaurus to approach,
Axing willows with sword making the road.
Could not find words, bogged head to ground.
In affection, she starred shy making Knight Man.

Oh poet still your poem raining weather in my mind,
Drawn sketches on my face and filled it with emotions.

This my poem wrote after I red a poem of my friend poetess that was a marvbelous poem.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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