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Potential Breakup Song

"Excuse me can I get this thing turned up alittle"
(random static)
"Alright thats better."

What is the heart-rate
Doctor is she ok?
I'm really hope we're not
Just alittle poison turned into alot
I guess this is the end
Is this goodbye
Just between you and me
You never really my friend
Baby this had to end tonight
I swear...

"wait hold on go back to the begining"
"sorry...i think i have it this time"

How'd he enter here so quiet baby
I was only sleeping on the couch
You told me to sleep in the other room
But now I get it
I thought you heard me when I said get out
I'll give you till noon

I'm sorry that I'm telling you
Its alittle to late
To say I'm sorry baby
You've already been caught, june
I knew this was fake
To f*cking real to be anything

If you really loved me
Then why the fuck is our door locked
I don't wanna make a scene
But baby he's fucked

"Hey guys? Isn't there supposed to be a break here"
"Ah, fuck it"

What is the heart-rate
Doctor is she ok?
I'm really hope we're not
Just alittle poison turned into alot
I guess this is the end
Is this goodbye
Just between you and me
You never really my friend
Baby this had to end tonight
I swear...

Is this possible...
Really sweetie
I accept your apology
Probably be better off
With you anyways
Next time lets be a little more civil

Author notes

speaking parts are part of the theatrics of the song. I never heard the real version but I took the name then started singing with my guitarist. And recorded it. And this is every word in it. Hope you like it?

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  • JustxThexBeginning
    November 5, 2008

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    definitely a breakup song... but the you got back together... interesting... so it was the POTENTIAL... lol... thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck...