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Unfair

Tragic.
The girl could not
Utter the word “No.”

Vulgar.
The beast trespassed -
But he wasn’t told “No.”

Enslaved.
The girl swept
Beneath his masses.

Detestable.
The vulture who
Fed on his prey.

Pathetic.
The girl said
“Please, stop”
One minute too late.

Vile.
The boy who said
“But, I’m almost done.”

Ruined.
The girl swept
Beneath his masses.

Unfair.
The boy who got away.

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