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What happened?

I get lost in my mind
When people are not kind
I think about you
Even though its no use

You died
The thing is I survived
So let me end my life
Let me meet you in heaven
Where there is no strife

I'll clean up our mess
And I'll hide it in our dream chest
Do you wish me to come
Or shall I stay here and drink rum

Your happy
Why cant I?
You always have a smile on
But your gone

I'm the one whos dead
While your up in the sky
having the time of your life

I love you but wish me the best of luck
For I shall die

Stupid?

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  • xeroabyss II
    November 5, 2008

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    It almost seems completely unfair how love can make you feel so alone and hurt for a myriad of reasons.


  • PreciousPoet
    November 3, 2008

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    Tres bien!

    Again I am astonded by the simplicity and the complexity of emotions in your poems. This can speak to many while still showing you. That is what a poet should stive to acheive and you have done it time and time again.