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When I See You

My angel, my darling,
My only true friend.
The one that I'll love,
To my dying end.

I wish to show you,
I wish you to see.
The things that I picture,
That I hope will be.

I see your smile,
As I lift up your vale.
The sweetest beginning,
To my glorious tale.

I see you asleep,
On our first wedding night.
I see you breathe softly,
In the dim moonlight.

I see your eyes,
As they flutter awake.
And you glow like the sun,
As if the first was fake.

I see our first home,
in a quaint little town.
I see your delight,
As our baby comes down.

I see our young son,
Play in the long green grass.
I feel myself wishing,
The time wouldn't pass.

I see our boy grow,
And I see his young brother.
You look at me hoping,
That we'll have another. 

I see us grow old,
In that same little town.
I see our grandchildren,
That never seem to frown.

I see you in heaven,
All clad in white.
Now I truly know,
What love feels like.

Author notes

This is how I hope my life turns out. It's only modest hopes, but what else could anyone ask for? Hope you see it the way I do.

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Comments

  • Musafir
    November 16, 2008
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    nice poem with good flow.
    Best wishes,


  • poeticsparks
    November 15, 2008
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    Lovely

    Beautiful flow...the dreams and hopes so well penned..


  • Wolven Roses
    November 4, 2008
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    very very nice. thank you so much.