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I really don't believe love until I met her,
Everything seems perfect when we're together,
But one day those times reached its end,
My heart was drowned and I can't defend.
I really do love her no one told me that,
Left with only memories I can look at,
What can I do to bring her back?
If only I can stop the clock.
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Author notes
The reason behind these words is that it is uncertain to see her again because high school is over and it is like we are on our own lives now. She will now being far from me and I can't do something to make her stay.
A contest entry
- Your Belief In Love (75 words or less) by oOJohnOo.
400 points, ended November 16, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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yeah that makes a very big change, if both of you are going to College in a different university. Well I don't see it as a hindrance...I just don't know but how far is far away?
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ah, i see your authors notes now. thank you! you see one of the main reasons I like knowing what the meaning behind the poem is....is so i can feel the pain, or love...or the emotion you yourself exude through your words. this poem is beautiful and painful. great job
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great poem, but painful. i want to know and understand the pain behind it. let me know in your authors notes the reasoning behind these words.
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