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Splashed Arches of Vibrant Thought

a mongrel artist stood in the drizzling rain
admiring the crumbling sky
and holding a can of curdling swirling ink

and with a ruffled quill
he splashed arches of vibrant thought
coloring emotion in an airy crown

painting rainbows
that come showering down


A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Creative and lovely imagery...

    xoxoxoxo

    mystic


  • sunoir
    November 4, 2008

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    clap clap clap

    "he splashed arches of vibrant thought" "coloring emotion in a airy crown" I can see that and feel that...big smile


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 3, 2008
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    i knew this was going to be killer, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    OOPS!


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Kool

    Nice one, hoss.


  • charcoal
    November 3, 2008

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    I like it. it's playful and fun (:

    mongrel artist- love that

    you rhymed! I'm sure it just happened but I loved it .

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