Here I am today.
I wouldn't want my life any other way.
It took so long to become like this.
I'm living my life ever so bliss.
It's been a long while.
Since I did smile.
To an actual point..
Where I mean it.
I am finally getting to where I want to be.
For the first time, I like me.
I look in the mirror, and I like what I see.
I don't need to think depressing thoughts about life.
And for the first time, I do not want the knife.
That girl has finally died.
And I haven't cried..
In a long time.
I can explain.
That I want my life to be susstain.
Of course I hope it will get better.
But for now, this is my happiest letter.
I hope this life sticks around.
I can't be bound..
To be the girl I was.
To my boyfriend, I love you.
To college, I will stay true.
To my family, we will be strong.
For the first time, I'm not doing anything wrong.
I love it this way.
And I want it to stay.
My life is wonderful..
Please don't leave me.
Author notes
It's only a forced rhyme poem that I decided to write because I am in love with the way my life is today. 5 months ago I was nothing going no where in a shitty situation. My life took a complete 180 and I love it. I just wanted to write again considering it's been so long.
Please tell me what you think
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It shows through in this poem how life is so much better for you than in your past...I've been through alot of the same things so I can truly say I'm happy for you.
Life can be good if you have good things and people around you.
Stay happy!!
darlintlc
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Wow! Glad to hear that everything is working out for! Thanks for sharing to poem, it's really great!
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wow, you have a lot to be thankful, coming through some hard times and now I see why you call your contest, My Life is Brilliant. Good luck to you.
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Thank you for your comment. I didn't think this poem was all that good because I forced rhymed some of it. If you look back on some of my older stuff you will see that I wasn't a very happy writer. It's very amazing when you think nothing can ever get better.. I was in a hard relationship for the last two years.. I went to college 2 years ago but dropped out.. My parents were beginning to give up on me. I was smokin alot of weed and underage drinking.. I was a party girl.. The relationship I was last in- the guy used to hurt me emotionally, mentally and sadly physically only sometimes physically.. But I couldn't manage to get outta that relationship.. I wanted to leave so many times.. But it was him.. The guy I'm with now waited for me to get outta the other relationship.. He was the one who was there when the other guy made me cry.. He was there when we fought.. He even picked me up the one time that guy dumped me out on the side of the road.. My life now is wonderful.. And it amazes me.. I had a thunder cloud over me.. Now I have sunshine and blue skies.. Thank you again for your comment.
Ashley
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yes, I did look through your older stuff; that's the reason I left the comment I did.
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