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Don't Close Your Eyes

You smile so sweet just like an angel.
Just close your eyes and we’ll be able.
You’re so beautiful in every single way
and I think about you every day.
Locked alone inside my head
remembering the things you said.
I wish that you were here with me
because there’s nowhere I’d rather be.

Don't close your eyes girl
it’s no surprise girl what you mean to me,
and I'll be right here waiting anticipating you to rescue me.

For myself there’s no one else
who makes me feel the way I do,
when I'm with you, you know its true,
there is nothing I wouldn’t do,
to make you laugh to see you smile
even though it’s been a while.

Don't close your eyes girl
it’s no surprise girl what you mean to me,
and I'll be right here waiting anticipating you to rescue me.

All the time you’re on my mind,
And I know that you will find,
that you’re all I need, the air I breath.
And I would do anything
to be with you and dream of you
because that’s all I want to do.

I see the fire in your eyes,
Its brighter than all the stars in the sky.
How I wish that you were here
because all my pain would just disappear.
Don't close your eyes girl because I want you to see,
Don't close your eyes girl because you mean so much to me.

So I'll just kiss your lips and say good night,
While I dream of you in another life.
You don't even have to cry,
I’ll cuddle with you by my side.
I know the LOVE we have is true,
I can't wait to spend my life with you.
So please don't close your eyes
because we both know it’s no surprise.

Author notes

my friend josh wrote it and I revised it and made it a bit better.

Ladybug lands on lee

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  • SmartBrick
    November 30, 2008
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    Deep!Very nice


  • SemiCharmedLife
    November 30, 2008
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    That was great and deep!
    Thanks for entering!


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    November 19, 2008
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    I liked this a lot but i thought the use of the word Girl in several places caused it to go flat. I liked the last couple lines where you didn't use the word girl.
    So please don't close your eyes
    because we both know it's no suprise.
    Just my opinion still a very good write.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.