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This Path

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This path,
sometimes so rough
and rocky,  smooth with great
 things other times.   Keeping my eyes
focused on Him,  My  Jehovah,  My King.
Temptations  to distract me  here
Be my guide,  take my hand.
Lead me Lord on
this path.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • piccola silver member
    January 19

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    great job and it shows appreciation for the personal name of God ... nice job with the form also. Thank you for entering.


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 8, 2008

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    A beautiful rictameter you have penned. Words and imagery are content is so stuning. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest. This was a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    This is so beautiful, it shows your faith so well. I love the rictameter form too. Best to you in the contest. Thanks for stopping by with a hoodwink x x x x


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    This brings to mind a very old saying, faith helps one along the rocky road.'s

  • goalsv
    November 3, 2008
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    Beautiful words and picture. A great rictameter.


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is a beautiful Rictameter of faith and trust. It compliments the picture prompt so well.

    Dennis

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