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Busiest Silence

'


thinking
in the midst of confusion..

what can I say?
if this borrowed time,


..is all I have

in this busy town.


'

A contest entry

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  • sense surreal
    November 17, 2008

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    I love how you've come up with the idea of borrowed time, it is how you used in a thought

    I noticed, silence has been your muse


  • Amera gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Well! This short verse speaks volumes and I certainly understand. This poetry web site is a very busy town. Your little poem did make me sit up and take notice and I'm so glad that you "borrowed" the time to enter my contest.

    Love,
    Amera♥