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Story of a Masochist

Teeth numb
She is blinded by the colors

I want to sleep
To lie upon the floor
And embrace ignorance

She wraps herself
In warped agony
Intoxicated by her own pain
And collapses inward

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  • Hell In Harmony
    November 3, 2008

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    Teeth numb
    She is blinded by the colors


    good intro.

    I want to sleep
    To lie upon the floor
    And embrace ignorance

    i do that- occasionally.

    i like the ending.
    really emotional