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Oceans Apart

I shut my eyes tight,
And stood up,
On my tiptoes.
In hopes,
Of reaching your lips.
But fate pulled me down.
Down, down, down.
And woke me up,
From this sweet dream.

Reality’s such a bitch,
Isn’t it?

Miles apart…
But in sleep,
I can feel your arms around me.
I can hear your voice,
Whispering to me.
I love you, I love you,
I love you!
I think of you constantly,
Even though we’re oceans apart.

It’s an obstacle,
Meant to be overcome.

I won’t break down,
Just as long as,
You’re missing me too.
I’m stronger then that,
And I know so are you,
Someday we’ll be together.
I promise…
Until then I’ll whisper to the sky,
I love you too.

Oceans apart…
But I still love you. 

x-Pretty-Odd-x  <3

Author notes

Some thoughts in my head...
Written about someone =]
He might not know all this, but I'll always feel it <3

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  • Angelshadow
    November 7, 2008
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    Ah this was cute!


  • FallenxAngelxMisfit
    November 6, 2008

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    awe nikki its soo good, i love it1!!! I know it will work out like always awsome poem like all your others ones good job..

  • Dreamsofgold
    November 5, 2008

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    Your poem meant something to me,I am in love with someone who is at the other side of the world,we are seperated by a ocean.You did  a great job.Best wishes ,Dream.


  • Psyche Of Kandy
    November 3, 2008

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    I know where your coming from. I'm in a long distance relationship, and it's super hard. But I know things will work itself out ... Hopefully anyway. I loved this poem .. well, Love, this poem. Superb !

  • x-dont -ask-me-x
    November 3, 2008

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    awwweeeeeeeeeeeeee Nicole its so wonderful awsome amazing pretty gourgoues break my heart romantic. make me cry and wish i could fall in love awsome
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