I shut my eyes tight,
And stood up,
On my tiptoes.
In hopes,
Of reaching your lips.
But fate pulled me down.
Down, down, down.
And woke me up,
From this sweet dream.
Reality’s such a bitch,
Isn’t it?
Miles apart…
But in sleep,
I can feel your arms around me.
I can hear your voice,
Whispering to me.
I love you, I love you,
I love you!
I think of you constantly,
Even though we’re oceans apart.
It’s an obstacle,
Meant to be overcome.
I won’t break down,
Just as long as,
You’re missing me too.
I’m stronger then that,
And I know so are you,
Someday we’ll be together.
I promise…
Until then I’ll whisper to the sky,
I love you too.
Oceans apart…
But I still love you.
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Just something I wrote quite a while ago, back when I had feelings for a guy that lived far away.
Please tell me what you think
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It might be time to delete this one, after hearing what you told me. Just saying
Anyways it's pretty sweet for what had happened in your past.
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lol
NO KIDDING
like.. wow.
same here..to say the least..
i used to have someone ..that i couldnt touch..
but crammed into my heart the best feelin
i had ever felt.
Great write, poked me in the cheek ;] lol
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This was a wonderful free write
It had personality
And the background really makes it pop
first verse was my favorite
Kepp penning
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Ah this was cute!
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awe nikki its soo good, i love it1!!! I know it will work out like always awsome poem like all your others ones good job..
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Your poem meant something to me,I am in love with someone who is at the other side of the world,we are seperated by a ocean.You did a great job.Best wishes ,Dream.
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I know where your coming from. I'm in a long distance relationship, and it's super hard. But I know things will work itself out ... Hopefully anyway. I loved this poem .. well, Love, this poem. Superb !
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awwweeeeeeeeeeeeee Nicole its so wonderful awsome amazing pretty gourgoues break my heart romantic. make me cry and wish i could fall in love awsome
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