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A Winter Day

the sun glints off the snow,
throwing sun spots across your eyes
the sky shines even bluer
in contrast to the pure white

a beautiful winter day

the wind nips at your skin
making your cheeks rosy
you bundle deeper
in your thick coat

a cold winter day

"Winter, a lingering season, is a time to gather golden moments, embark upon a sentimental journey,
and enjoy every idle hour. "
-  John Boswell

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  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    great take on the prompt. the imagery was very nice throughotu this entire piece. i liked the first stanza especially.

    thanks for entering and goodluck