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Two Souls, Two Hearts One Journey



 
upon the threshold called life we joined
a never ending ride to paradise
Through tough burdens we finally rejoined
becoming a comforter in ones eyes

Hearts entwine beating together as one
and our spirits soar beyond weathered skies
lifestyles shared in love won't come undone
for the journey of life is seen in our eyes

Within our kisses a new fire ignites
and our hearts happily connect for life
Upon the wings of forever, take flight
on unexpected paths as husband and wife

Bound to you, two hearts, two souls, one journey,
An endless walk in the life of unity

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A contest entry for:
the two hearts...
Love is a endless journey of the two hearts...Unknown. This quote is a prompt.

Sometimes we have to wait to be fulfilled by the one we love do to circumstances and life, is it worth it? Only time will tell, when you walk the journey of love and life....

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    A beautiful sonnet telling the tale of a perfect love.

    Great stuff


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    What a beautiful dream this piece expresses. The love of two people engaging in a journey together filled with so much promise. Sometimes we do have to wait.
    A wonderful entry into this contest..I wish you luck..
    Love you
    Soulful Woman


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Indeed a sweet work by the poet while describing the story of the heart and the lovers as well..well done...thanks for sharing..


  • The Drifter
    November 3, 2008
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    So very beautiful--so from the heart--so wonderfully writen--such a sweet read.
    Love you


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 3, 2008

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    wonderful done and just a joy to read my friend, something pure and uncut in love, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    I hope to find this one day.

    This is so beautiful hun!


    ♥


  • prettyangeleyes
    November 2, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I truly loved the way you depicted how one loves so strongly.

    I loved the line:

    An endless walk in the life of unity

    Maybe I'm pulling at strings here but could you possibly be talking about marriage or walking down the aisle?


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 2, 2008
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      Indeed I am. not for me at the moment but this poem reflects lovers finding hope and becoming husband and wife.

      Great tug of strings my friend, you nailed it.
      Passions

  • GoneToo
    November 2, 2008

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    First off let me just be a guy and say I always love your backgrounds

    Second, this is fabulously soft and engaging and so full of hope. Has an uplifting quality to it that I just love. Your pen is beauty once again!



    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thanks so much, I am trying to provide some with hope. My Texan doesnt quite believe much in hope lol, and cant say I have much lately. But maybe one day, we all can see this type of love.

      Thanks again honey for your lovely words, and damn it, its not me in the damn bg

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