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My Grin

Missing image
the drooling idiot
who lives within
seldom shows
its toothless grin

my grin
rests upon the other side
Cheshire cats'
invisible sin

A contest entry

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  • poetrandy
    December 3, 2008
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    Fetching!

    A fine poem and illustration! good luck in the contest!


  • Dark Otter
    November 6, 2008

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    This gave me a grin!

    A clever little ditty that is quite visual (A very happy and drooling dog). Is her yours? He looks like a good guard dog.

    • Draig aine gold member
      November 6, 2008
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      the dog is buster brown an enormous sook, his only wepon a very strong wagging tail, I wrote about him in my red dog

      thank you for your friendship and patience

  • Bob Fox
    November 3, 2008

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    Lol

    well there now is a grin on this old ugly mug. But i gotta tell ya I just love both cats and dogs. lol


    • Draig aine gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      dogs and cats

      added my red dog for your consideration

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