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Autumn

Life is gone.
The green is gone.

The season of death.
The season of disappearing.
The season of preparing.

A season of change.

Beauty, color, and the smell of sweet coldness.

Admiration of Autumn
Many perceptions.

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Horrific Hollis

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  • Heva Feva
    October 10

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    This is so cool! I really like this bit:
    "The season of death.
    The season of disappearing.
    The season of preparing."


    Thank you so much for entering my contest, I love your poem! Good luck...
    -heva


  • arnica karuna
    June 3

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    Nice. I wanted it to go on longer not because of anything else but just because I was enjoying it so much!
    Some more detailing would've been nice, but even without it, your write is beautiful
    Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest.


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Love this write. The simplicty yet deepness of the simple words really catches my attention. Wonderful piece. Great job and good luck in the contest!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    I really like the last stanza. great entry


  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    disapearing --> disappearing
    perceptioins --> perceptions.

    i liked the last three lines, they had nice imagery.
    good take on the prompt, i could really picture this.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Rhythm Child
    November 15, 2008
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    i adored the last two lines, they were very beautiful


  • CoralxxChaos
    November 15, 2008

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    This is so true, everything about it.
    You're an amazing writer, especially for only being 13.
    Keep it up =DD


  • Gulfbreeze
    November 15, 2008

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    I feel the Despairing change of seasons through your words, and that is the object of poetry, to feel, you did a good job with this.
    I have known the smell of sweet coldness.
    one little thing, you have a typo in the last word, perceptions...


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 11, 2008
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    how verypoignant and well written, thanks for sharing

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