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Just thoughts written down

 

The sun come out today, yet really didn't seem to shine
with so many thoughts of you running through my mind.
pictures begun to fade as I went across your photo book
all those treasured memories ~From years ago I had took.
Moments of hesitation now intertwine within any and all plans
of how life is supposed to really work with these shaken hands.
Too late for that "One last hug" that I now hold so very dear
why couldn't my heart have known, why wasn't it more clear?

I hold this faith pure inside, for I know that day shall come

when I walk the path you did and see the man you've become.

Lonely days fall to night wearing upon this broken smile

wanting to see you once more even if, ...for just a little while.





 

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  • kel dog
    December 22, 2008
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    this is a great peice. just thought turn out to be great writes.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 25, 2008

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    you have to tell me when you finish this , am kind of curious about this piece myself, keep it flowing


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is truly a reflective piece...Reflections sometimes opens the door to our future..
    Stay well my friend...
    Much love always,
    Nor


  • earthstar
    November 2, 2008
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    great start look like you are doing some reflecting
    I have been feeling like this it seemed like our treasure memories have faded in the past. What we treasured most can not reflect in mere pictures,words go unsaid now the chance is too late. this is what it brought out in my thinking take care
    brenda