I am done trying to make you all happy
Done trying to make everything work
I am so over making life so damn easy
When all I get in return is hurt
Im sorry I wasn't good enough
Sorry I just couldn't make the cut
Im sorry I failed to give you the perfect love
Sorry for thinking you gave a fuck
Im over it now and Im moving on
Done and sorry I couldnt do more
All the feelings I had aint gone
But theres nothing left worth fighting for
I laid down my arms and walked away
A soldier with no fight left in her
Theres only one thing left to say
"Babe please point me towards the door"
I dont want you to hate me, thats not my intention
But only so much I can force and try and push
Even a soldier must fall from attention
And give it all a second look
So here I am eyes open wide
With no answer to be seen
Even as I write this I cry
You may never again hear from me
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Anything Goes! by vampireblood.
475 points, ended November 15, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think yall?
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This was very good, it was full of emotions. I can relate to this piece in a way. But I must say that death isnt the answer. You think it is at first but then you realize there are people out there who truly care, even if you think they dont, they really do. Thank you for entering this into my contest, I appreciate it. And Best of luck to you.
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TY. but the death thing wasnt intentional
more of im leavin ur life
and nvr cumin bak lol
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You just keep venting...PLEASE don't kill yourself! Sometimes life is hard and we have a lot of struggles and tribulation, but just hang in there. It helps to talk about it and to vent. I use poetry to express feelings that I would never be able to tell anyone.
I like that this poem is so real and a complete expression of your feelings.
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