I see these words in color
sparing no essence of remorse
a curioso performance
rampaging across the landscape
of a tenuous identity
they pour in malicious oils
staining me in shades
contemptibly issuing their precision
on the terror inside
of a searcher of individuality
knowing not where to go
from ruby lips they spill
victimizing with flawless spoil
designed with permanence
to belittle and despise
leaving no spark of malice
from being heralded to all
tumblers click a finality of conclusion
upon the concussion of sound
striking deeper and harsher
than the thrown stone
leaving me to wander
aimlessly unwanted
Author notes
image prompt
http://caught-cartooning.deviantart.com/art/HATE-101370710
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- journey by autarky.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 15 entries
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indeed I agree with star, been here know it well, this is powerful well done and best wishes to you
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dayam bro you are on fire with this write!! as the deep and saddened imagery shown tells a profound story of a traversed journey of life broken left with a feeling of invisibility and unwantedness with heart wrenching emotional pain. I have traveled this journey far too often in my life. well done and many blessings always xxxx
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