I knew he was the one,
After the light hit his face
my heart spun.
The sexy way he smiles,
would have me driving
to him no matter the miles.
The glow in his eyes,
Set me aflame
that's no surprise.
The ripples of the
wind blowing his hair,
Oh how much longer can I stare?
Oh my goodness he is shirtless,
I just want to touch his chest , this I
confess.
He makes my teeth sweat,
And anyone who has seen him will tell you
he is hot and this you can bet.
I can smell his tasty cologne,
I just want to get him all alone.
My confession is you know I love you,
Because you're everything to me and this
is true.
Author notes
Just thinking about HIM..
A contest entry
- Put Him On A Golden Pedestal by Frodofan.
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I don't really know. Tell me what you think?
Comments
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wow, I really like this! I feel the same way about my boyfriend.
Much Love and Keep Writing,
~Alicia Lynn
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LOL thats rather alot of fun, i really enjoyed that. I was after something a little deeper but that still brightened my night up
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i think everyone has a poem like this about someone they love and they need to get out there, it's not embarrassing it's sweet. it's a well wirtten and well thought out poem too, good job
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Could be a little refined I think. I'd like to see the word "I" capitalized everywhere. You go back and forth.
I like all the little thoughts expressed her. They're nice and sensual. Thanks for entering.
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