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slipped through your fingers

caught by browns

and this golden yellow trim


reinventing everything I ever was

did you recognize me?



as I sighed
I slowly fell






catch me

Author notes

prompt: fall


hope that you like sis

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  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    i do like this
    i like the last few lines, they always hit hard.
    i liked your take on the prompt and your imagery was very very nice, as usual.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    this is a really creative write says a lot with only a feew nicely chosenwords