flakes;
fluttered like my eyelashes
as you plucked them one by one
snow always turns to water
and
I will always blink
this wasn't right
but we still
fogged up the windows...
Author notes
hope you like
written-in-ink
prompt: winter
there is something about
winter
cold
ice
that just heats me up
and as werid as it is
i love
love
love
snow
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: seasons [3/4] by etoile.
550 points, ended November 17, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha very beautiful. strikes me as a true thing. something many people have felt. and you captured it very well.
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This is cute, spunky. It starts off delicately with a caring gesture, and then moves up a gear to a possibly forbidden rendezvous.
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ahahh
thanks
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You're not weird I also
love
love
love
snow
This was a very thought provoking write and I like how vague yet sure these words were
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haha this made me laugh a little bit, especially at the end. i liked it.
the imagery was actually amazing. especially in the beginning. i loved it.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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hahah
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Very creative with a priceless ending!
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like the last line
Loved the last line- nothing like fogging up the windows on a cold winter's morn!
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hahah<3
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clicking on random and got this. hahaha ... very funny. I see it's not done; I'll have to bookmark it so I can see the finished product
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lol
hahha
i will try and not let you down
hahah
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