think about free expression
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| | must it have
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| \ form(?)
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| / (or rather instill)
| allow /
blanketed | |
|-------------- meaning in---------------birdsong
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\ | and long lost dreams
\----------------------- US
Find your muse in the autumn air
And fly
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a very very unique free form. creative and inspiring to someone who has been in a writers block! Looks like it was fun to create as well. I've always wanted to be able to write a poem in a spiral... but it's not possible here. Nicely done!
Keep em coming!
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Very cool free form. I enjoyed reading this poem in many different directions. In the last lines, do you mean "your" instead of 'you"?
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Thanks
yea i did mean your thanks for catching that for me.
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Interesting . . . and I could understand it! LOL
Nice job and very inventive!
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Beautiful
There is something incredibly captivating about this piece... Reminds me of aestheticism. Well done
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This is fascinating. A wonderful piece of art that has such creativity imbued in it's words and in the layout of the piece. I really love it and it shows how creative poets can be when they're really trying to make something special. Bravo on this piece and good luck on all future works of art!
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WOW
this is art in all aspects!! i love love love it. it's a statement!
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Very cool!
Loops and tangents that lie in the unplanned and free. I think it's the best way to be, less in the way and less restrictions that keep you from moving and flowing along. I very much enjoyed reading this one
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