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Hemel

We have been waiting for the shimmer clouds
For quite some time, though we have been informed
That they'll be just over twelve cupcakes late.
So time to stop at the butterfly shop;
There be blooming tea in January,
And icing sugar sprinkles all year long.
Another treat of lemony schnitzel
And one might just say you be fit to burst,
So long as you've tried Mirvana's green tea.

Away on a meadow of liquid dreams
Painted in silver and aquamarine
Will be sunshine and marshmellow kisses.
Melting rainbows and stardrops deliver
A most pleasant mixture of night and day,
And our hands in the heavenly river.
Don't be alarmed by happiness within;
The waters won't catch and take you away.
Lavender valleys and skylines of gold
Have only begun to raise up the hills.
Even if there is no one to be found,
One can't be alone in the soothing fire;
Something always there, never retreating.
Galaxies sitting on a fingertip,
Never put out or dropped down in the dark;
Don't be frightened, take hold of what is true.
We've got love everlasting; that's enough.

Author notes

Hemel is dutch for Heaven 'v'

Picture credit http://jazzy.deviantart.com/art/heaven-68907233

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 18

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    This made me smile although it was filled with some food I have never heard of in my life. Well done. Best to you in the contest


    • pumpykin
      September 18
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      Lol thank you. Though I don't know why people keep saying this is full of food, there's only two food items in the first stanza and one beverage >< Lol


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 9

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    This is an awesome poem. I felt like I was in a dream world. One full of food I love. LOL I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest

  • kitty-kat09
    January 15
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    wow wonderful


  • aboomer silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Lovely! I love the unusual feel of this! Great wording and images! So many that I like - couldn't list them all without copy/pasting your whole write.....
    This was most interesting, and most enjoyable.
    best wishes in the contest


  • Rhythm Child
    November 18, 2008
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    imformed should be informed

  • Rhythm Child
    November 14, 2008

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    Thankyou so much for entering
    i do not beleive in luck but i beleive in talent and it is a quality that will win this contest

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • Guerrero
    November 14, 2008
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    i liked the ending the best..it was very good.. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest..


  • Onionducks
    November 11, 2008
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    quick note: just to let you know, the font would be easier to read if a bit darker!


  • Onionducks
    November 3, 2008
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    Forgot the applause...!


  • Onionducks
    November 3, 2008
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    Such a sweet poem! I enjoyed reading this, it filled me with warmth!

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