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Strolling to love's tune

We strolled so casually along,
nudged fallen russet with our toes,
had not a care in all the world
with fingers entwined-
whistling merrily.

Passing artists ply their trade,
we stopped to drink a lemonade
beside the swirling river’s side-
just whistling merrily.

To a delighted minstrel’s laugh
we danced a two step ‘long the path,
winning claps for our silliness
bowing gracefully-
we blew a kiss.

Held so snug within your arms
while we sat upon the stairs-
gentle lap of water along the edge,
whispered words strummed
heart's every beat.

An afternoon we shared in love
beneath the rays of autumn’s sun,
while strolling along the river Seine
our fingers entwined-
whistling merrily!








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Inspiration prompt 'Love is a endless journey of the two hearts'...Unknown

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Humm..this is really very beautiful piece scripted by the true heart of the lover..thanks for such a warm entry in my contest..well done...


    • Sandi Alford gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      Thank you :)

      I'm pleased you enjoyed it, thank you for your kind thoughts
      It was a pleasure to write for your contest, and also thank you for the inspiration!

      many blessings Sandi