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I'm sorry




I'm sorry I
pushed you away.
Had no choice.
Broke your heart.
Broke my heart.

Isolating myself
from the stress
of society,
my life
is slowing down.

Searching
for
peace of mind,
solitude,
closeness
to Nature,
and a
closeness
to God----

Still,
when I think of you,
my longing,
my desire,
my heartache--

returns.





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  • ListeningToSilence
    February 4
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    Wow. this is so sweet and so so beautiful.. i love it!! xx


  • katie-jo
    January 24

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    I agree with suseann, this is such a bittersweet goodbye. It feels so hopeless the whole way through, and just when you think that you've numbed the heartache for a while, in the end it's stronger than ever.
    Thank you so much for sharing this with me, and for entering my contest. I really love this poem.
    --red


  • suseann
    November 3, 2008

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    So bitter sweet is the fond fare well. Yet a soul's need must take priority over all else. Someone can't be that same treasured apendage of joy,if it longs for some essence not provided.This is so honest and passionately expressed here in verse.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    awe.
    This is wonderful!
    I'm still in awe with this piece.
    I felt my heart sink when i read this i so know the feeling of this.
    Great write and i'm glad you shared it. Thanks for entering and good luck .
    -Mandi

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