How can I measure my love
For the only man in my life
How can I ever explain
Why I will always be his wife
Can one measure the blue sky above
Or measure the depth of the Ocean blue
Then don't ask me to measure my love
For the man that I love so true
He is my breath, my life, my love
He brings me so much happiness
His good looks and manly charms
Make me feel that I have been blessed
The strength in his arms as he holds me
The melody in his voice as he speaks
The tenderness of his love
As he plants a kiss on my cheek
Can one measure the Sunshine
Or count the Stars in the Sky
That's how much I love my man
He's the what, the who, and the why
A contest entry
- Put Him On A Golden Pedestal by Frodofan.
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hi there
i really loved reading this poem. i love the fact that love is so alive for so many of us. you are truly a lucky and blessed one, as you say
i absolutely love how you compared your love to immeasurable things. especially this stanza.
Can one measure the blue sky above
Or measure the depth of the Ocean blue
Then don't ask me to measure my love
For the man that I love so true
the flow was wonderful here. and i felt my heart soaring, really.
congratulations on your prize, it was well deserving
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Thank you for your kind comment Priya1989 on my poem. Glad you enjoyed reading it.
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This is a wonerfully created romantic poem and suits the prompt so well. I loved the imagery your words have painted. Good luck in the contest dear.
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Thank you daviscth for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
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true romance , well expressed good luck
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Thanks Pete, I appreciate your comments.
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Very nice. Your ending, especially, is an obvious response to the questions proposed with the contest and I love that! Many only wish they had what you do. Thanks for entering!
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