shall the world rise to fall in the end
Armageddens reach closer than farther
Are we set out to fail and or falter
shall we lend love to save our bretheren
has the many unearthly gods left us
All the rulers run from the uknown
As our great and almighty powers end
has even our earthly things failed us now
No for shame we shall rise again not fall
Man kind withstands all trials all tests
why we as men question our gods powers
No the earth shall stand forever not fall
Men and women and children you have past
We as men must celebrate these hours
A contest entry
- Rock My World…Take Me Too All Limits by Debbie Hansman.
600 points, ended November 9, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Strong and thought provocative the language is powerful and stirs something squashy in my bowels.
pleasure to read
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A powerful write.
"No for shame we shall rise again not fall
Man kind withstands all trials all test"
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for entering & Good luck!
debbie
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