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Giving & Working

This pen and paper as I write are working together.
The paper soaks up the ink and the words.
The pen uses it's ink to say the words it feels.
The hand that writes gives the pen and ink.
The feelings that the hand is sending.
As the hand writes the mind is telling the hand to write.
What the minds thinking.
The heart and it's feelings are helping and working.
Why can't we work together and solve our problem.
Can this pen and paper receive these feelings.
That the hand,mind,feelings,and heart give them

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