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A Puppet Named Poe

A puppet named Poe sat in a toy store
He was waiting for something but wasn’t quite sure
Just what that could be – he didn’t quite know
Or where he had come from or where he would go

He wore little white shoes tied with laces of brown
And a wide string rimmed hat with some corks hanging down
With a green coat of satin and buttons of wood
He sat on the shelf where the other toys stood

He had emerald green eyes that were strikingly clear
With two little gems hanging down from his ears
And curly light hair that shone like the sun
And a face of an angel that could make the world hum

He carried in hand a small bow and a string
And longed for the day he could make that bow sing
He’d play to the world and they’d hear the notes sigh
And the melodies would linger long into the night

Then a storm came and tore right through the toy store
And left the toys scattered all over the floor
And Poe saw the fear and the pain everywhere
And that moment he knew he had something to share

His hand held the bow as he pulled cross the strings
And a symphony rose – how he made that bow sing
And the melody rang through the heavens on high
And the toys they all smiled and gave a deep sigh

And then when the store was all quiet and stark
The toys came to life and they played in the dark
And Poe struck a tune on his magical bow
While they danced and romanced of the places they’d go

And each night there after – Poe played a new tune
While the toys laughed and danced there beneath the gold moon
And the string and the bow that Poe played in the store
Brought harmony forth cross the world evermore



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  • Meine Liebe
    November 24, 2008

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    wow! i am left speechless again! i just dont knwo how you do it and how you come up with such wondrful story/ poems. Please dont ever stop writing! You are such an inspiration to me! :


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    How you can go with verse and rhyme and tell such delightful and interesting reads...This truly is a charmer for all us young folks and older ones that love toy stores and stories of toy shops,and toys...Endearing write my friend!


  • storiesuntold
    November 10, 2008
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    Very good write here

    I enjoyed this write very much


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Enchanting.. You tell the best stories in rhyme.
    Such a talent.. Awesome.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Extraordinary

    This is one of your best, I think. I truly enjoyed it.


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Wow ! !

    What an excellent story teller you are I so enjoyed this poem. It flowed so smoothly and your rhyme is spot on Great job indeed


  • rbruce gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A truly wonderful poem, the rhythm, the story and the rhyme. It would be a great poem to read to children of all ages. Most enjoyable.


  • Nicada silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is such a sweet poem here! Amazing rhythm and rhyme in this write too. This is an inspiring and uplifting read, and I enjoyed it very much. Great job! Blessings, Patty

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