The sun starts setting to the Southwest of the shore.
The sky is a beautiful array of wonderful colors.
I sit on the sand as the sun sets more and more.
Everything in the world, compared to this is duller.
The hot, sunny day keeps on disappearing.
It loses it's way through the sunset's bliss,
As more beautiful colors keep appearing.
This is a day I will absolutely miss.
Pretty soon the sun goes down,
And I can soon see the stars.
The colors become darker and I start to frown,
I sit there wondering how it's all so bizarre.
Now I just listen, to the waves slowly falling.
My eyes begin to close and I feel so tired.
Birds stop chirping and people stop calling.
Now I'm so glad, for this day I have admired.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest #1,768,934 by PerVirtuous.
700 points, ended November 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So what do you think?
Comments
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cool i really like that!
my fave part is the last four lines!
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This is veru good! Thanks.
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Good
I love this, it painted the picture beautifuly, its well worded and well written, i enjoyd reading it, your a talented writer, good luck in the contest
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