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sugar coated bastard

Yea that’s what you are
Like a bad M&M
Sugary on the out side
Sweet talking your way
Into innocent lives
Looking so nice
But it’s a false prelude
Once you get past that thin
Sickly sweet layer
The real you shows
You’re a sugar coated bastard
And everybody knows

Contrasting to the charming cover
You’re nasty, Cruel, and revolting
You dragged us all in
With your nice boy act
Only to turn around
And really open up
You’re nothing but a fake
Who’ll do anything to get his girl
But get past that sweetness and
The real you shows
You’re a sugar coated bastard
And everybody knows

Well I’m done with you
I saw the sweet and then the sour
Shoulda made your sugar
A little thicker honey
Because now you’ve lost me
And you’ll lose a lot more too
Because you’re just a phony sweet talker
With nothing left to prove
You say your not really a jerk but
The real you will always show

You’re a sugar coated bastard
And everybody knows

Author notes

so yea, random, kinda about someone. i commented on someones poem saying "he sounds like a sugar coated bastard" and realized i know alot of people who are sugar coated bastards and that inspired this. not sure how much i like it.

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  • Falling in Loveless
    November 2, 2008

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    well weitheir you like it or not i absolutly love this! XD haha, its sorta like a theme song and represents my ex perfectly! haha, this got me in a good mood thanx =)