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Lukewarm.(Cinquain)

Lukewarm
Seems you don't care
When I need you, not there
Just look at me with a blank stare
Not hot.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    November 16, 2008

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    Hmmm, I like this. I love Cinquain's anyway, they can be so expressive if done well. I hate that feeling too, when someone does that to you...