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You are...

Your soft naked finger tips,
Brush across my skin
With the delicate touch that you were blessed with.
All night long, your voice whispers to me,
Carried on the wings of angels.
And I long for you to lay near,
To my dismay, you lay in your bed,
Miles from my aching heart.

I smell your skin,
I see your face,
I feel your touch.

Your are perfection personified.

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  • forevermyangel14
    November 2, 2008

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    this is so beautiful and perfect though it's so short. you capture so much emotion in such little words.