You broke my heart,
And told me lies.
I fell apart.
I sat and cried.
You broke my spirit,
With your evil ways.
I couldn't take it,
But I still stayed.
You made me your slave,
And took my soul.
You never forgave,
And I never had control.
Even after all the pain,
I will still live longer.
I will move on each and every day,
Because what does not kill me, makes me stronger
A contest entry
- iPod Titles!!!! by JustxThexBeginning.
950 points, ended November 9, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So what do you think?
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i liked it
i think its an inspiration or at least should be to every girl done wrong -
very true indeed... what does not kill you will indeed make you stronger... i'm glad that you could learn from this experience and grow and know that you can indeed stand on your own feet even through pain and times when you do not want to go on... thank you so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck...
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The will you have to live despite pains is explained well in the last lines..what does not kill me, makes me stronger. Good luck in the contest
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Very Good!
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