Blood streaming longer then the Nile
Somehow my shadows are stripping crimson
A lifeless body…
Dripping, dripping down the tile
A path, still my tears remain unshed.
Souls dancing against time, and our
Hearts are burn for sinful bliss.
Silent, my heart,
For pain is a better friend.
Darkness comes, I will embrace it
As I scorn the world for its deeds.
A contest entry
- Rock My World…Take Me Too All Limits by Debbie Hansman.
600 points, ended November 9, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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To me such a painful write...I could feel it all the way through.
The ending really got to me.
"Darkness comes, I will embrace it
As I scorn the world for its deeds"
Very powerful words.
Thank you for entering & Good luck!
debbie
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thank you
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