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Happy

Honoured by your presence
Any time of the day
Positive thoughts always of you
Planning out our time
Yearning for tomorrows dawn

A contest entry

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 10, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    Nice Job!


  • Malabu
    November 5, 2008

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    it's a simple and beautiful uplifting poem...softly spoken with a whisper...to a lover's ear...
    lasting is the smile
    it brings
    mal


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 4, 2008

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    I see alot of hope in this write, and hope is always a good thing i suppose.

    Thank you for entering this contest
    All the best to you

    Ken


  • dustytiger
    November 2, 2008
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    what a nice short and sweet poem, best of luck in the contest


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    i liked the idea of planning out the time for a better future

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