Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

~Time~

It changes leaves on trees
It will never cease
It creates what our eyes see
Broken piece by piece.

Like the sweet smell of a rose
It cannot be trapped
Noone knows where it goes
And so quick with fingers snapped.

It starts you out as little
With not a lot to say
Then turns you old and brittle
Your new haircolor, grey.

It will come for you too
No matter how you try
There's nothing you can do
Time will still go by~

Author notes

Ladybug lands on lee

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Miss Chievous
    November 26, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    That was wonderful!
    I enjoyed the rhyme
    Thanks For Entering!


  • Amun-Ra
    November 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i like that, m fav

    Then turns you old and brittle
    Your new haircolor, grey.