As each season goes into the next
Waiting for changes becomes so complex
Time changes as it does two times a year
Even He stopped the sun a day this is clear
Now it may be growing dark and nights are long
Out of this darkness is where you are made strong
Pitch black He was in that boat over the raging sea
Even then the Savior ransomed you and me
The sea is quieted for it is time for winter's debut
In this season trees show off spectrums of their hue
Time for us to get in position and planted for a change
When He comes to make us new allow to be rearranged
We need to know He has not forgotten you or me
It will be time to move forward and bloom like an almond tree
I will look forward for the warmth and freshness once again
Bloom where you are planted love is the water He will send
A contest entry
- Rock My World…Take Me Too All Limits by Debbie Hansman.
600 points, ended November 9, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - worst PW by Wind Walker.
400 points, ended January 5, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Will you continue to move forward and not be set back in any circumstance?
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Very Well Spoken
I think this is very inspiring and insiteful
good luck in the contest
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A very inspiring write...I really enjoyed reading this.
I love the ending
"I will look forward for the warmth
and freshness once again
Bloom where you are planted love is the water He will send"
Thank you for entering & Good luck!
debbie
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Like an almond tree. That was an original thought on the new bloom. So filled with inspired thoughts. It is a forecast of the coming of Jesus in a splendid form.
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Why thank you kind sir...
Blessings dear brother...I loved what you observed from this about Jesus and His return...actually this was the quickest jot I did because the one wanting me to join a contest said she wanted a new thing...so it was fitting...when we had to turn our clocks back and I work 11-7 I thought of that and a sermon I heard in church Sunday...I am reading more of yours now...I was just off work last week and was able to fix my poems and all...I have one, speaking of horses...Jesus on a white horse somewhere in my archives that i pray will find soon enough...again thank you and blessings and I have added you to my favorites.
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imagery is just so lovely
It is time to move forward and bloom like an almond tree.
love no doubt creates growth
oh so Gorgeous
God bless you my friend...
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