i killed a man today. his name was johnny.
the sirens are getting closer.
i'm probably going to prison.
A contest entry
- journey by autarky.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 15 entries
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Well, I am not sure what to say about this.
Thanks for the entry.
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I loved these lines. i killed a man today. his name was johnny.the sirens are getting closer.
i'm probably going to prison. lol i think all the poems ive read today, this has by farrr been the first one for me to tilt my head like a dog, with a blank expression on my face. this is absolutely great for the pic prompt.
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i'm pleased you enjoyed it!
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lmao
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