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Outside

Tranquil green
spread through the woods
leafy sprays of lace

Lose your thoughts
in this beautiful gift
nature with all its grace...

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word prompt: serenity and fern

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 24, 2008
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    I really like that you have created such an atmosphere of peace and beauty with the prompts that you were given the gentle rhyme is well done and it paints pictures in my mind of where I would like to be right now! Thank you for this entry

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Dienush
    November 21, 2008

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    I like the peaceful tone to this, really fits your prompt. It's succinct and I like that. One little thing: "Loose your thoughts" - should be "lose" instead. Thank you for the entry

    ~Diana


  • smiley
    November 3, 2008
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    nicely done

    leaving me with a peaceful heart, a calming soul, and a restful spirit...

    Yvonne