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Trouble in Paradise?

"I need to leave this place"

She whispered, surrounded by her paradise.
It was finally too much
And she let the tremor overtake her;
Let it guide her somewhere else...
Somewhere peaceful, if all went well

"Never have I been so determined,
Never as unsure"

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Kathryn, Emma,

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