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prisoners in coffins.


try to wake me up;

give your red boots a shake,
the dust has collected
for way too long.

the darkness is as encasing as the sand-turned-diamond.
      translucent and impenetrable.

I still sleep.
      I think eternity has me in its grasp,
      and I’ll remain in my immortal slumber.


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  • aanika
    November 9, 2008

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    ooooooh.
    this is creepy.
    I don't understand the red boots line, but I'm retarded sooo it's okay.


    I like this though.


  • Lj-
    November 9, 2008
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    Too*


  • Bleed the truth X
    November 2, 2008
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    Oo very nice..and mysticalllll.
    : ]


  • stasis
    November 2, 2008

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    This is gorgeous... very heavy hun. You've literally taken the words from me, it's so beautiful and concise. Never stop writing.

    ♣ Tegan


    • etoile
      November 2, 2008
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      thanks soo much
      i'm glad you liked it, never stop writing yourself. you're brilliant
      Emma<3

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