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What I Fear Is Love~

Wake me when you go to sleep
You feel when I am near
Terrorfied that we will meet
I am the thing you fear.

Do I have shrap pointy fangs?
Eyes as black as coal?
Do you think I'm without a heart?
That I live without a soul?

I am not a monster
Nor a demon, flesh so cold
I am just like you
Longing for someone to hold.

What you're scared of now
If I don't push or shove
Will blossom in the future
From total fear to love.

Author notes

Ladybug lands on lee

This is sorta metaphorical how normally boys are "scared" of girls when they're kids then one day they fall in love with one...I don't know just something that came outta my mind hope it makes sense to everyone else.

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  • SmartBrick
    November 2, 2008

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    AWESOME!Here is your score

    65/66

    if you'd like to see the categories with you score,tell me!Great job!