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Nancy

Nancy let the orphan go
Will sykes let her go?
Will Fagin?

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The words I used were:
Nancy
Orphan
Sykes
Will
and Fagin

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 21, 2008

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    Thanks for your entry

    Well done. It has been a long time since I seen this movie. lol, I should have brushed up on it for this contest. I am glad that you all had read it or seen the movie as it would have been particularly hard to write on this.

    The form was followed well. The syllable count was right on. You followed the statement, question, question format well also.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy


    • lianonsidhe silver member
      November 22, 2008
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      Hi Little Feather
      Thank you so much for the wonderful gold trophy! I will keep it polished and sparkling. I'm honoured to win this because I know what a great writer you are, after all you were one of my favourite teachers. Thank you again, sweet soul.

      • Little Eagle Greeters member
        November 22, 2008
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        Aww



        Thank you. Such wonderful words. You did well. I hope you enter all my form contests. I have three running right now. I doing another class as well, though it is not through the class list, I have a group for it.