Nancy let the orphan go
Will sykes let her go?
Will Fagin?
Author notes
The words I used were:
Nancy
Orphan
Sykes
Will
and Fagin
A contest entry
- Poetic Form: Quinzaine - Prompt - Oliver Twist Word Bank by Little Eagle.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for your entry
Well done. It has been a long time since I seen this movie. lol, I should have brushed up on it for this contest. I am glad that you all had read it or seen the movie as it would have been particularly hard to write on this.
The form was followed well. The syllable count was right on. You followed the statement, question, question format well also.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
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Hi Little Feather
Thank you so much for the wonderful gold trophy! I will keep it polished and sparkling. I'm honoured to win this because I know what a great writer you are, after all you were one of my favourite teachers. Thank you again, sweet soul.
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Aww

Thank you. Such wonderful words. You did well. I hope you enter all my form contests. I have three running right now. I doing another class as well, though it is not through the class list, I have a group for it.
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