My hearts undone by mortal plight
to wit hatred and malice hideous sight
I plea with wounds of crimson stain
seek love and its healing balm
from pain
My people pershish because
of the lack of knowledge
Searching in vain for pursuits
of power in lofty pinnicles
like college
Tho learning is an appealing cure
Love endures all things for sure
Come touch the heart that gave you life
abandon jealousy, envy and strife
I have a plan for all humanity
its brilliance illumanate my being
Look past the horizons of mortal lust
to eternal virtues of devotion and trust
There you'll ascertain the greatest love
you've ever seen
A gift from above I freely give
to every human being
for I imagined you in infinite light
my friend and children to do whats right
That we may have a world thats pure
in laughters embrace,
let love be your cure
A remedy for all the ills that's
given you pain,
my most cherished creation
who life has sadly profaned
A contest entry
- Omni-potent by Envelope.
1800 points, ended November 28, 2008, 16 entries
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A beautiful heartfelt write that I thoroughly enjoyed the content and message...such an excellent write dear poet thank you for sharing such heartfelt thoughts.
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hmm, well done rhyme, but i'm not the biggest fan of this style, the classic, olden feel, it doesn't ring well with me, although for a rhyme i was happy to see some grace and intelligence, but I think the form here stole the show, rather than the content, i was almost encouraged to ignore what you were saying and simply fall into the rhythm of your words, not exactly what i was looking for in the contest though
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Beatifully written
excellent poem so beautifully written. Each time I re-read it I have a better understanding of its truest meaning. I wouldn't change a thing. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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I imagined you in infinate light...to come to me this night! That the world is pure, and let life be yoru cure! Inspiring poem. Deep and contemplating! ~Sie
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I plea with wounds of crimson stain
I love that line! Amazing write!! Good luck!!! -
Great rhyme scheme, this is a lovely poem.
I love the message, and the way you ended it was quite nice.
Keep up the good work, thank you for sharing.
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Tis such an amazing feat to truly render a poet speechless I do believe, yet ye have done so without any effort it would seem. such a wonderful write. And best of luck to ye in the contest.
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