Tinkers demise uncertain,
authorities stumped
no apparent motive his disappearance.
Desperate widow now distraught
canvasses known circuit of Tinkers realm
her beloved companion gone
no trace to ponder, save his muffled yelps call
to her lonely ears.
Sounding so close and yet so far.
Tinkers fate now
smothered in cellulose hell.
Author notes
Artist Credit Unknown (found on Google)
Usual Rules Apply
That's about it..have fun! Make me laugh
A contest entry
- Humorous Sunday Quickie by Carolina Moon.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent~
Too cute
I loved this...i just grinned...
TY for the much needed laugh
Congrats on the trophy as well
I have won 2 tonight
Hugs
Susan~~~
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LOL so glad to help and thank you for the kind words...
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Another fine work on the poem and the prompt! You are one talented poet!!!
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I needed a laugh and couldn't pass this one up. Thanks again for your time invested.
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Anytime!!
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This was a great take on the contest prompt, and well deserving of the trophy, well done!
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Thank you for the time invested in reading and commenting on my ramblings....
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LOL Great job. I especially loved the last two lines.
Tinkers fate now
smothered in cellulose hell.
Mike
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*Laughing* Thanks for the read and comment glad you enjoyed.....
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LMAO This is awesome!! A different take and it's hilarious LOL Love it! Thank you for entering.
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Thank you so much for the Silver and chance to release my muse, I glad you enjoyed the reading and left such a wonderful comment.
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